The Things We Never Said

Author: Mara Ellison

Status: Complete first demonstration draft

Format prepared: Microsoft Word (.docx)

Calculated draft word count: approximately 40,028 words

Structure: 39 numbered chapters plus Epilogue

Form: Novel

Source-control note

This manuscript was created solely for the Casover Publishing sample-review project. It is not based on a real author, client manuscript or existing unpublished work.

The author brief retains a target length of approximately 55,000 words. The completed draft is materially shorter at approximately 40,028 words. That discrepancy is intentional for the demonstration because the Manuscript Review should identify and assess the actual manuscript rather than silently treating the target length as achieved.

Review status

The manuscript itself is now complete. The next stage is to process this exact draft through the standard Casover Manuscript Review workflow without rewriting it first.

The review should assess the manuscript as supplied, including its deliberate strengths and weaknesses, and should not use the demonstration notes as instructions to manufacture findings that are not supported by the actual text.