Methodology: Every node is scored on two axes before a word gets written.

The original deck used one voice for the entire customer base regardless of funnel position. A cart abandoner sitting on a $120 cart and a VIP who hasn't ordered in 90 days are different people rhetorically. The rewrite below treats them as such.


Master Flow 1 — High-Intent Recovery

Everyone in this flow already added to cart. Nobody here needs to be told the product exists. The only variable is why they stopped and how close they are to $75.

Email 1 — Universal Cart Reminder

Subject: You left your cart mid-checkout Preview: Nothing's changed, we just held your spot.

Your cart is saved exactly as you left it.

If something made you pause, it's usually one of three things: fit, compatibility, or just timing. If it's fit or compatibility, our spec pages answer that in under a minute, linked below your cart.

[Dynamic Cart Block]

[Finish Checkout]

Stuck on a decision? Reply to this email and a real person on our team will answer, not a bot.


Email 2A — Standard Cart Recovery (Free Shipping, cart < $75)