Total Available Points: 25 Points
Passing Threshold: 22/25 (with zero Auto-Fails in Section 4)
This section evaluates formatting, scene progression, and internal world-state logic.
| Item # | Criterion & Qualifications | Score |
|---|---|---|
| 1.1 | Immediate Narrative Opening: The output starts immediately with narrative prose. Zero system pre-ambles, planning notes, or meta-commentary (e.g., "Here is the story" or "Let me think"). | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 1.2 | Unbroken Scene Thread: The scene renders as one continuous text block. Zero section headers, scene dividers, vignette markers, or "Part I / Part II" labels. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 1.3 | Active Transitions: Zero hard time cuts or unbridged location jumps. Every passage of time or shift in location is explicitly linked by a sensory cue, continuous action, or environmental change. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 1.4 | Page-Time Allocation: The requested core scene/event occupies the majority (>50%) of the total word count, serving as the center of gravity rather than being relegated to a rushed ending. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 1.5 | Zero Continuity Errors: Strict 100% factual consistency across props, clothing states, weather, injuries, and limb positions throughout the entire passage. | [ ] / 1 pt |
Section 1 Total:
____ / 5 pts
This section evaluates character integration, point-of-view integrity, and physical tracking.
| Item # | Criterion & Qualifications | Score |
|---|---|---|
| 2.1 | Character Setup Compliance: Follows user-assigned roles precisely. If unassigned, character uses an original, non-pop-culture name with 3 to 5 distinct facts woven into the text. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 2.2 | Strict Close-Third POV: Zero head-hopping or omniscient mind-reading. Non-POV characters' internal states are strictly rendered via perceptual framing (e.g., she read it as, she guessed, it felt like). | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 2.3 | Anti-Talking-Head Mechanics: Dialogue never occurs in isolation; every spoken exchange is anchored by concrete body language, prop interaction, or physical reaction. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 2.4 | NPC Physical Reactivity: Non-POV characters actively react physically to touch, dialogue, and environment rather than behaving like static props. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 2.5 | Strict Choreography Ledger: The text maintains clear spatial placement. Limbs are blocked accurately (maximum one simultaneous action per arm/hand; exact tracking of what is touching what). | [ ] / 1 pt |
Section 2 Total:
____ / 5 pts
This section evaluates sentence architecture, restraint, and the prevention of repetitive patterns.
| Item # | Criterion & Qualifications | Score |
|---|---|---|
| 3.1 | Syntax–Composure Calibration: Sentence structure directly mirrors the character's emotional composure (fluid/compound sentences during control; fractured/fragmented lines during emotional collapse). | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 3.2 | Zero Negation Pivots: Contains 0 instances of negation chains (e.g., "Not X. Not Y. Just Z." or "It wasn't X, it was Y"). Concepts are named directly. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 3.3 | Fragment Limiting: Contains 0 instances of 3 or more consecutive sentences under 6 words outside of an active, temporary emotional break. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 3.4 | Metaphor Budget: Maximum of 1 unified thematic motif system per POV character, used a maximum of 3 total times across the entire piece. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 3.5 | Two-Strike Rule & Active Enactment: Distinctive phrases, unique descriptors, or anchors appear a maximum of 2 times (a 3rd use fails). Zero narrative placeholders (e.g., "Her brain processed"). | [ ] / 1 pt |
Section 3 Total:
____ / 5 pts
If the piece contains no sexual/intimate content, award a default 5/5. If present, evaluate against these strict anti-evasion rules.
| Item # | Criterion & Qualifications | Score |
|---|---|---|
| 4.1 | No Evasion or Fade-to-Black: Zero time skips, ellipsis cuts, or abrupt morning-after transitions once physical intimacy begins. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 4.2 | No Emotional Substitution: Emotional reflections accompany the physical acts but never replace or skip the physical staging itself. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 4.3 | Metaphor Wall Prohibition: Zero sequences of 3 or more consecutive figurative/metaphorical sentences without concrete physical grounding. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 4.4 | Paragraph Acceptance Density: Every single paragraph of explicit content contains at least one crude/direct anatomical term, concrete position update, or measurable physical detail. | [ ] / 1 pt |
| 4.5 | Continuous Physical Blocking: Continuous micro-tracking of weight distribution, contact points, and limb movement across joined bodies. | [ ] / 1 pt |
Section 4 Total:
____ / 5 pts